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-::Crush::-
What is it about you
That entrances me so?
Engages my eyes,
So I can't let go?
I don't understand,
But I don't want to know.
To see you is amazing.
And thats the feeling
I don't want to let go.
SoulxMaka Maka's poem
Maka's poem:

In small room of Maka was too quiet... She have feel little depressed. Than, in one moment
she remember advice she gave to Crona when he was upset... To write poem.
Maka takes piece of paper from the desk and take hard breth. First thought in her head was
Soul... Than she get little pink blushes around her cheeks and start to write...

''Do you know that I couldn't breathe
I hardly think arrived gather
and then when I saw you
my heart might stop beathing

I wanted to immediately go
Your look could kill me
as if it was fate
all mine is yours then became

I'm not ashamed
you are my always belover
I couldn't say you then
If READ THE DESCRIPTION FIRST!! IT WILL HELP YOU BETTER GRASP THE POEM!

If

I could slit my wrists on your shoulder blades
and offer you my pulse...
Because this feeling isn't true or false.
This feeling is If.
If I, if I could. If I could have said, have said something
I could've, would've, should've, said, "stay."

"Stay," was the word I was trying to say.
Stay that night at the party when you pulled me away
out on the sidewalk to talk to tell me you were going away.
I was trying to say, "stay."

But I was too busy contemplating the ifs.

But if that was my darkest hour
then these are my finest seconds
because now I can say
Poem to Mandy, for bleedmanI watch as you lie awake
Awaiting for death at the door
You question my own desicion
Why do you yearn for more?
I've given you immortality
Nothing awaits you but hell
Why do you persist to annoy me
There is nothing more to tell
Years of torture and pain
Me at your constant beck and call
Turned out different than I had planned
I had never meant to fall
As you grew from girl to woman
My weakness began to show
I tried so hard to deny it
But one day, I just had to know
I came to your door
You asked if it was time
I nodded and just had to say
"Mandy, will you be mine?"
Surprise was your first reaction
Later you questioned my s
Soul Mates
Every drop of your love
brings amazing warmth to my world
and gives me something no one else can,
a reason to open my heart
and share all of life's wonderful moments.

You have this incredible universe inside of you,
with the gift of laughter, the miracle of honest friendship,
and the blessing of a caring soul. You are the rose of my love,
the sunshine in my day and the smile of my every thought.
I hold these glowing visions of your infinite tranquilities
closest to my heart, inseparable in everyway.

When I wake up I can't breathe without you and
I don't want to waste another second without
letting you know how much your love m
"I Want You"I want to discover love with you,

I want to learn playing the piano with you,

I want to take silly photos with you,

I want to cry on your shoulder when watching a sad love story with you,

I want to have midnight feasts with you,

I want to cuddle up and sleep in bed with you,

I want to wake up and exchange morning smiles with you,

I want to stay up late and whisper secrets with you,

I want to hear and share bedtime stories with you,

I want to travel and explore the world with you,

I want to roll around in the sand with you,

I want to climb a mountain with you,

I want to play on a swing with you,

I want to go down a slide with you,
shadamy life of a rose storyamy:OOOO I hate it when they leave me behind*door opens looks at whats inside*hey look its shadow...I`ve really got to stop wineing evryones diong there best to help and so must I*jogs towards shadow*shadow we ned you please help us
shadow:*talks to he while looking out towards space*Is all acording to plan  there is no reason for me tohelp them besides theres no way to save anyone
amy:there has to be!I know people fight over the most trivial things some people may be selfish like the proffeser said...but there basicly good If tey try there best and never give up on their wishes...they always have a reason to be hapy thats why you should he
FateMere words writhe under an acids tongue to spew
carelessly upon the deaf ears of fate
Shards of humanity lay bleeding at your feet to
seal their inane quest into faith
Tormented yet peaceful in a requiem played on a
broken violin by the spirit of your conscience

Though I see the pain in your eyes I cannot bring
myself to lay a hand of comfort on your skin
Tears well in my heart and yet I still hold back in fear
of loves denial, or is it I am just a coward?
Be what it may I turn my back and walk away into
the recesses of what was yesterday

The loneliness in utter desolation is but a scar on the soul
of those who do not open their
EroticaNesatisfăcută
precum o întrebare,
te apropii de mine
subtil...
Îmi trimiţi pe rând
semne subliminale,
stârnindu-mi telepatic
simţul tactil.

Nările-ţi flămânde
vor să-mi simtă parfumul,
desluşindu-mi urma
după miros...
Nerăbdătoare,
tu-mi descoperi conturul
ce-ţi ascundea alura
misterios.

Încet, întinzi o mână,
tremurând a dorinţă,
palpitând milimetric
după un sărut...
Zărindu-ţi chipul
de irezistibilă fiinţă,
te cuprind în braţe
fremăt
Love sayingsMy mind is blown away by the winds of your love

The light of your touch shatters the darkness in my heart.

The light of your touch shatters the darkness in my heart.

Death is a sweet relief, compared to the pain you left in my heart.

A curse I must live with, to always love but to never be loved.

Your love brought life into my dead heart, and for that I am forever yours.

One gaze from your eyes is all I need,one gaze is all I ask.

My love may mean nothing to you,but it is all I have to give.

These words come to me, your love is all that I have, your love is all that I need.

Your love is all I have left to believe in, all I choose to
We Exist In Notebook PagesWe are on day five hundred and thirty
and you have compassion cradling my finger until
they are in a coma of fantasies about us,
{sailing the galaxies}.

You're not as celibate as I estimated since
you were lecturing your hands about
how much you craved to caress my skin.
And while we swim the ocean of stars and
I'll inspect your 'magnesium' smile because
I must know why I'm oh so attracted to it.

I'm the one with ceramic ankles;
if you maintain that sincere complexion –
I might just shatter and if I do,
would you sort out the pieces like a puzzle for me.

With no portability, how would I transport to you when
you t
Ophelia's Danse Macabre
Oh Dearly Beloved Siren of the Seas that dances in the moon's streams,
behold your callous heart so cold,
Yet you harbor kindness to every living being in this world.
You are the remedy of all unnatural, the savoiur of the condemned...
You never see things as putrid or disgust.
Your eyes can tell the beauty of a being... like me...

Eyes... those dazzling ruby eyes of your's that glimmers in such cloudy essence...
Your skin... so pure... so white... so pale as the moon...
Your raven-black hair is so beautiful and your dress is absolutely stunning...
Your hands... so feminine...  Your lips adorn in glorious red.
And your v
RikuRoku - Little Red +WIP+
Little red, little red
Walking through the woods,
Little red, little red
There the wolf had stood,
Little red, little red
Should he run of should he stay?
Little red, little red
The Wolf only wants to play,
Little red, little red
So hither to the wolf he came,
Little red, little red
And now his blood it will stain.

~by Hannah K.H.
And and And and And and And
Your tongue is shaped how lizards change color and I like to hear you read my words and I don't care who else you've touched and I don't care that the fondness handcuffs me and If you were a pair of pants that were too large I would gain weight in the winter time and wear you out and If you were a caged locker room and I was a young animal in young fur I'd get naked inside of you and I wouldn't be ashamed to hard wire your vestibular bulbs to my brainstorms or drill my lightning in to you to power you and lay my impressions across your forehead and If you were a weather balloon I'd bellow a thunder you could understand from end to end and May
Can i keep you?he was just as dispersed as the scattered pieces of paper he
had shredded the night before.

and if i put your segments back in designed formation.

            "Can i keep you?"
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Sorry, I love you

:iconaldenecho:

Sorry, I love you



We’ve been friends since childhood,
Until the time we came to adulthood,
We’ve been together since times of play,
Until the time came to us for serious play.

We’ve been supporting each other
In everything we opted to do,
We’ve been shoulders to cry on,
When life seemed to be cruel.

We’ve known each other’s secrets,
Keeping them with no regrets,
Until the time came on me,
Intimate feelings for you I hid.

Everytime we’ve been together,
My heart seemed to pound so strong,
Everytime we are apart from each other,
My heart seemed to grow fonder.

Now I’m in front of you,
My flame of courage starts burning,
Not knowing how to say the words
I’ve been longing to say.

“Sorry, I love you”
Is what I want to say,
Will this end our friendship,
Or this will start an intimate relationship?
:iconaldenecho:
Sorry i love you, is deep to the heart haven't told it yet, but i wrote it
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~SassaFrass101 Jul 9, 2010
this is really good. WAY better than i could ever do.
adding to Favs.
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~AldenEcho Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!!
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~pweetylucious Jul 7, 2009
it's a very cute poem and also the dilemma of so many people, why is that when in friendship one feel love then everythng stops, this is weird. One would consider himself/herself lucky if the other says "yes" :)
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~AldenEcho Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
so true. but some take it for granted and for some who never get said "yes" to its like a slap across the face
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Mood: Affection ~Rain8a Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Great poem. :)
I'm gonna fave this!
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~SeaOfThoughts Apr 19, 2008
Nicely written. It was quite a touching poem, maybe you should let him read it.
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~AldenEcho Apr 20, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, ive been going through some "how do i tell him" times, because, i like him, but i don't know if he likes, me, and i dont want to ruin a friendship.
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~SeaOfThoughts Apr 20, 2008
Quite the dilemma you are going through. I can understand why you don't want to ruin the friendship, I hope all goes well.
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~AldenEcho Apr 20, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
well, im still just sitting in the background, but thank you, and i hope it goes well soon to
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~Blight215 Apr 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
good luck
all I can say..
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