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Sorry, I love you



We’ve been friends since childhood,
Until the time we came to adulthood,
We’ve been together since times of play,
Until the time came to us for serious play.

We’ve been supporting each other
In everything we opted to do,
We’ve been shoulders to cry on,
When life seemed to be cruel.

We’ve known each other’s secrets,
Keeping them with no regrets,
Until the time came on me,
Intimate feelings for you I hid.

Everytime we’ve been together,
My heart seemed to pound so strong,
Everytime we are apart from each other,
My heart seemed to grow fonder.

Now I’m in front of you,
My flame of courage starts burning,
Not knowing how to say the words
I’ve been longing to say.

“Sorry, I love you”
Is what I want to say,
Will this end our friendship,
Or this will start an intimate relationship?
Sorry i love you, is deep to the heart haven't told it yet, but i wrote it
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SassaFrass101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
this is really good. WAY better than i could ever do.
adding to Favs.
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!!
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pweetylucious Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009
it's a very cute poem and also the dilemma of so many people, why is that when in friendship one feel love then everythng stops, this is weird. One would consider himself/herself lucky if the other says "yes" :)
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
so true. but some take it for granted and for some who never get said "yes" to its like a slap across the face
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Rain8a Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Great poem. :)
I'm gonna fave this!
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SeaOfThoughts Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008
Nicely written. It was quite a touching poem, maybe you should let him read it.
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, ive been going through some "how do i tell him" times, because, i like him, but i don't know if he likes, me, and i dont want to ruin a friendship.
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SeaOfThoughts Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008
Quite the dilemma you are going through. I can understand why you don't want to ruin the friendship, I hope all goes well.
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
well, im still just sitting in the background, but thank you, and i hope it goes well soon to
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Blight215 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
good luck
all I can say..
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
thx
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supermarshmallow90 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
I can relate to this poem... >< Except I'm too shy to say anything!!
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
i know same, but i have been getting alot more confidance lately
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supermarshmallow90 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
More power to you! XD
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
WOOOO!!!
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defythylife Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2007
dude thats awesome. ^-^
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
lol thanks
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Grime325 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2007  Professional Artist
wow this is a great poem I think I'll add it to my :+fav:
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!!!
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bleachrave Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007
Your rhyming scheme seems a bit.... Spastic, lol
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AldenEcho Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
SHUT UP!!!@><
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